2020级“译名堂”毕业翻译研讨-第十三场
汇报时间：2022年12月08日20:00-21:30
汇报地点：腾讯会议 272-407-339
汇报学生：姚思棋
指导教师：李立平
汇报题目：《电力公司施工组织设计》（第四章第七节至第十一节）汉英翻译实践报告
参与导师：李立平、胥瑾、李虎
内容简介：
本项目是华电集团为埃塞俄比亚联邦民主共和国亚的斯电力公司提供的施工组织设计。第四章为该项目的施工方案，具体内容为建设电力公司综合楼的土建、安装等。源文本共5.1万字，译者翻译的选段是《电力公司施工组织设计》第四章的第七节至第十一节，约1.5万字，作为本次翻译实践报告的材料。其中，第七节为电力变压器安装、高低压柜安装以及防雷接地系统；第八节为钢结构安装，包括钢结构安装准备工作和安装工艺流程；第九节为脚手架及支撑搭设方案，包括脚手架材质选用及质量要求、落地式扣件钢管脚手架计算书、搭设技术要求、脚手架的搭设及拆除施工工艺等；第十节为临水临电施工方案，包括临时用水用电 和安全措施等；最后一节，即第十一节为季节性施工方案，具体包括雨季施工、防风、防雷等举措。
源文本属于信息型文本，用词科学规范，行文严谨，逻辑性强。从词法层面来看，源文本中包含大量工程类专业术语（如剪刀撑、横向水平杆、密目安全网、对接扣件等）；从句法层面来看，源文本中无主语句和长难句偏多；从语篇层面来看，源文本属于电力工程类信息文本，语言表达规范，需要译者对源文进行准确的理解与分析。
译文修改：
例1：
ST: 根据埃塞国家要求，现场采用三相五线保护接零系统(即TN-S系统)。结合现场实际情况，分五个回路供电，并采用三级送电，二级漏电保护。总配电箱中漏电保护器的额定漏电动作电流为150mA，额定漏电动作时间为0.2S，其额定漏电动作电流与额定漏电动作时间的乘积为30mA. S，未大于30mA. S，符合要求。
TT1: According to the national regulations of Ethiopia, the three-phase and five-wire protective neutral termination system (TN-S system) is adopted on the construction site. Based on the actual condition on site, the power supply is divided into five circuits, and three-level power transmission and two-level leakage protection are adopted. The rated leakage action current of the leakage protector in the main distribution box is 150mA, its action time is 0.2s. The product of these two is 30mA.S. If not greater than 30mA, it meets the requirement.
TT2: According to the national regulations of Ethiopia, the three-phase and five-wire protective neutral termination system (TN-S system) shall be adopted on the construction site. Based on the actual condition on site, the power is supplied by five circuits, with three-level power transmission and two-level leakage protection adopted. The rated leakage action current of the leakage protector in the general distribution box is 150mA, and rated time for leakage action is 0.2s. The product of these two is 30mA.S. If not greater than 30mA, it meets the requirement.
例2：
ST: 运至地面的材料应按指定地点随拆随运，分类堆放，当天拆当天清，拆下扣件和铁丝要集中回收处理，应随时整理、检查，按品种、分规格堆放整齐，妥善保管。
TT1: Materials delivered to the ground shall be removed and transported to designated places, stacked in different categories, and counted on the day. The removed fasteners and iron wires shall be collected and recycled. They shall be sorted and inspected, neatly stacked in time according to their categories and specifications, and then carefully preserved.
TT2: Materials delivered to the ground shall be removed and transported to designated places, stacked by category, and cleaned on the day of the removal. The removed fasteners and iron wires shall be collected and recycled. They shall be sorted and inspected, neatly stacked in time by species and specifications, and then well preserved.
例3：
ST: 按《规范》电焊机采用专用配电箱，箱内设漏电保护器，并作到一机一箱一闸，交流电焊机还应装设二次防触电保护器。
TT1: According to the Specification, a special distribution box shall be adopted/installed for the electric welder machine, which is equipped with leakage protector with one machine, one box and one shutter. The AC welding machine shall also be equipped with secondary anti-shock protector.
TT2: According to the Specification, the electric welder machine has its own special distribution box, equipped with leakage protector (one box and switch for each welder). The AC welder shall also be equipped with secondary electric shock protector.
研讨反思：
通过此次翻译研讨会，译者对翻译的过程有了更深刻的认识，也认识到初译文中存在的不足，以及如何改进等。
第一、专业知识理解和阅读平行文本的重要性，在此次翻译研讨的过程中，译者发现自己对原文专业知识的理解有待提高，从而提升译文的准确度，比如，例2中的“当天拆当天清”，这里是指当天清理运至地面的材料，而不是清点材料。在老师的指点之下，对译文做出了更改。
第二、保持科技英文的简洁特点，针对这一点，初译文中有很多地方表达不够简洁，用词用句冗长啰嗦，应根据具体情况，使用代词，从句，with引导的独立主格结构等，从而使译文更简洁明了，也与源文简洁的行文风格相统一。
第三、术语统一，因源文本属于电力工程类文本，包含大量的专业术语，译者需要在全篇，保持行文间术语翻译的一致性，体现严谨的工作态度，努力做出有质量的译文。
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